October 24th 2021
Looking at others blogs was a fun process in which I gained valuable knowledge about many eminent individuals from a variety of backgrounds. From my classmates I received great feedback which will help me improve my next blog posts in the days to come. I gave positive feed back to my peers and gentle feedback when needed. I got to learn about Fashion Writers like Tavi Gevinson, Mathematicians such as Srinivasa Ramanujan, and Nobel-Prize winners like Malala Yousafzai. Each of these individuals were unique and impacted the world in a positive way. For example, Malala has been speaking up for women’s education rights since she was little by protesting against the actions of the Taliban, since she was only eleven! Tavi Gevinson was a fashion icon who began her own fashion blog called the Style Rookie at the age of eleven, as a cause of boredom gaining a following of over 50,000 people. These are just a few of the examples of the many eminent people that we will be seeing this year. I am very excited!
By commenting on others posts this did not only help them improve their future posts, but it will also help me improve my blog. Looking at my peer’s blogs as a second set of eyes allowed me to discover aspects of their posts that I could use to improve mine and give solid feedback. Overall, I had a great time reading my peers blogs, and this experience and the comments I received on my post will allow me to improve my writing as a whole in my next blogs. I am excited to continue and I hope you enjoy my posts to come.
Stay Tuned, Justin C