This is a good effort. It doesn’t quite come together for me as a composition. Your work is neat and well executed, but the final image doesn’t exhibit a strong display of compositional techniques (rule of thirds, balance, negative vs positive space). Some of the choices you made just seemed random.
This is a good effort. It doesn’t quite come together for me as a composition. Your work is neat and well executed, but the final image doesn’t exhibit a strong display of compositional techniques (rule of thirds, balance, negative vs positive space). Some of the choices you made just seemed random.