I really enjoyed the commenting process as it lets me connect ideas from my post to others. By reading everyone’s personal connections I learned not only about their eminent person but about their interests and strengths. For example, I learned that Colin is really into anime, and Natalie wants to learn more about medical sciences. Giving comments on other people’s posts gave me the chance to get ideas and thoughts to add to mine that I hadn’t thought of before. The feedback I received was very insightful and gave me a better idea of how I can improve in my next post. One thing I will do to improve my posts in the future will be to break up my paragraph with sub-headers or pictures. Overall, I think that receiving helpful feedback from my peers helped me see what I can improve on in the future.

-Rian