Inverse: a time manipulation story.

Inverse: a time manipulation story.

story opens: a government facility in Seattle ( photo title – Seattle – Author – Felix wong – source – license – Creative commons)

I got out of my car and thought to myself “so weird being back here. Especially since the incident. It’s something that was relatively swept under the rug seeing as a nuclear reaction nearly happening in a government facility doesn’t exactly put the people’s minds at ease”. That thought leaves my head as

I walk towards the building and I hear an almost distorted noise but it’s very quiet and seeing it only lasts for a few seconds and I’m in this funky government facility I ignore it. I head to the building to be greeted by my good friend Paul who’s asked me to come and look over this new government funded project he’s doing for the university.

He says “good to see you again! But we can catch up later, right now we don’t have much time”. I ask

Him “what do you mean we don’t have time?” he replies “I mean technically the government shut us down and cut funding. they’re going to destroy everything soon” I think “this is weird he never told me.

This.” I follow him up to his laboratory and see this huge sphere-shaped object in the center of the room

I ask “what is this?” he says “think of it a time machine that uses the power from the center of the earth

To move any object to any point in time” I think this is crazy and he may have had a sort of breakdown

But I play along. He says “okay now Jackson stand with Daniel while I activate” he steps inside of this

Sphere and says “I’m going 10 minutes to the past I’ll see you then” I say “what does that even mean” just as I hear the machine boot up tons of armed guards run in and start yelling at him to power down. They begin shooting the machine which messes with its calibration setting it to send Paul 10 years in the past. As it actives the guards dive to safety. Dead silence. Jackson who was in front of me and gets turned to a liquid right before my eyes. And Paul isn’t in the sphere anymore. I’m disoriented and have no clue what’s going on but I make a run for it getting out of the building. But as I exit, I’m grabbed by…. Paul. He grabs me and surrounds me with guards. I have zero clue what’s going on. Paul looks older and weren’t these guards just shooting at him? Paul explains “I’ve lived the past 10 years repeatedly establishing this company just to prevent this and you ruined this.

Attempt, just like that your incompetence Is going to cost further years of my life. But Maybe it’s still salvageable.” Before I get to ask anything further Paul injects me with a sedative and I pass out.

I wake up in a dark facility tied down. A person in a pitch-black hazmat suit comes to me and goes to stick me with a needle and says “freaks with powers like yours deserve this” but I end up

Instinctively trying to move away and somehow dash out of my restraints, but I was strapped to a wall and I was now somehow standing behind the person. The man looks at me in astonishment not

Knowing what he has just seen. I don’t know how I did that but thank god I did. I run to the nearest wall

And dash through it. A few hours later in the early morning I’m walking the streets not knowing what I am anymore. I’m wondering where the hell these powers came from and especially

What the hell happened last night and what’s wrong with Paul. Suddenly I’m pulled into an ally by a

Woman. “hey your good looking and all but I don’t got any money on me right now, although trust me at literally any other time where I had cash and like an hour free I would” I say. she responds saying.

“no, you moron it’s me? Jessica?” my mind is entirely blank. She says “you don’t know a

Single thing about the plan we discussed” A few hours later late at night were in an empty warehouse.  I say “so you’re telling me were going to break

Into the most secure company in the worlds headquarters to steal their insurance policy and save the

World? She responds “if you want to make it that simple, yes” I think this is way too much seeing as

My life has crumbled before me and I don’t even know who I am or what I anymore. But right now, is no time to think about what had just happened, right now is the time that calls for me to act without thinking. Even further into the night we pull up to the building and park across the street. I take in awe this huge building that’s practically in the clouds. “is your objective clear?” she says I respond “sure… but can you walk me through it one more time?” she replies “Your task is simple, go to the basement which is 4 floors underground and take their insurance policy. Its whole purpose is that it’s supposed to keep the higher ups and scientists of the company safe while the rest of the earth is destroyed so that they can discover a way to revert it. But be aware Paul suffers from a form of time infection. It gives him abilities much like yours but much more powerful. He may be guarding the item.” I say, “sounds good, but what’s your job?” she says “well I clear the path of course” we walk through the door guns out and are met instantly with force. At least 40 guards rush from the elevator. “STAY BACK I GOT THIS” I say as run directly into the group of armed goons with time slowed to a crawl. Each stray bullet that catches me makes a sort of shield around me. When I stop running and time returns to normal, a wave of energy emits from me sending all the armed men flying and knocking them out. “I thought you were supposed to clear the way” I say sarcastically she replies “I wasn’t expecting this much resistance, and it’s not exactly fair. Just take the elevator down to B4 I’m going to the top to disable security” I reply “you alone with this type of resistance? That’s a death sentence” I say. She replies “stop worrying about me and go complete your part of the mission” we part ways her taking the elevator up and me taking it down. The second she gets out of the elevator she’s grabbed by neck by Paul. “You and Your buddy are dooming this earth, you can’t even begin to understand what will happen if you do this.” She replies “you’ve gone mad! You’re not trying to save everyone you would rather coward away and save 100 in the hopes they can revert this and save everyone” he says “the fact that you can’t even understand the simple fact that this is the safest and most likely to work way to do this proves your too ignorant to be saved” before she can get another word out Paul snaps her neck. He drops her to the floor and vanishes into thin air. As I step off the elevator to basement 4 I find it…. Empty? Almost looks like it’s been robbed or something. But that doesn’t matter I head to the room keeping the insurance policy only to find Paul standing right in front of it staring at it. I can see Jessica… dead. He turns to me saying “You just don’t get it do you? You think you can save everyone but in reality by not saving only a small amount of people and trying to revert the end you’re leaving No chance of anyone saving earth” I reply “you’re a lunatic, a madman You’ve never even attempted to try and save all 8 billion on people on this goddamn earth. YO-“he cuts me off “what the hell do you think I’ve been doing all these years I’ve been trapped in time trying to prevent this? I THOUGHT OUT EVERY SOLUTION AND TRIED EVERYTHING BUT AT SOME POINT I HAD TO ACCEPT THE FACT THAT I CAN’T SAVE EVERYONE AND SACRIFICES MUST BE MADE IN ORDER SAVE AND REVERT THE END OF TIME” He jumps at me and we get into a fight. I land some punches he does as well. He breaks my wrist when I throw a punch he catches and He knocks me down and throws me across the room. “You’re the final bug in the machine that’s stopping it from working and I’m about to squish you- “A loud gunshot rings out. Paul drops having been shot in the chest. I run to him he says quietly “You’ve just doomed earth and yourself without me no one will reset time when it ends and time as we know it will end.” I shoot him once again in the head. But as he dies a huge wave of energy emits from him. A huge white flash of light blinds me. And when I open my eyes to find myself at the university. In the parking lot. I can see… myself. I realize I must stop myself from going into that building but when I try to run my legs snap and break, I try to pull myself and my arms snap in half. I let out a blood a curdling scream and my body is ripped to pieces in a vicious and bloody way because of my body not being able to handle being in the wrong time. The last thought that enters my mind before I die that being how I thought I discovered my true purpose in my life my real identity. But clearly it wasn’t “as I get out of my car, I hear a quiet distorted sound but it only lasts a few seconds so I ignore it” I head to the building and go inside but Paul isn’t there. I go to the science department to check for him but he isn’t there either. I see this sphere with numbers going crazy. “what the fu- “the sphere lets out a wave of blue energy as it passes by me at a rapid pace my body ages, my skin falls off and my bones turn to dust while I scream in pain and horror. The whole world is wiped from space without a trace.

Jessica characterization

Jessica/side character characterization.

  • Static, boring, inconsequential,
  • Direct characterization: there will not be much seeing as she is such a minor and static character. But we are shown that she is boring and static through the small bit of the story she is in.
  • Indirect characterization: again not much seeing as she is a minor character but we will be shown that she cares for our protagonist.
  • Thoughts: doesn’t have many but does think that the antagonist is a good person at heart even if not clearly stated.
  • Actions: she is leading Daniel to the antagonists building to lead a mission to steal the insurance policy.
  • Speech: not a very verbal character but does have a few small discussion lines with paul and Daniel.
  • Affect: some effect. Without her the mission to steal the insurance policy wouldn’t be a thing.

Daniel characerzation

Daniel/protagonist characterization

 

  • Adjectives : Brave, confident, dedicated, strong willed, hard headed,

 

  • Direct characterization: a good example of how im going to do this would be a sentence like “Daniel had a feeling of bravery around him knowing he would have to use his abilities to stop whats coming”

 

  • Indirect characterization : His actions in attempting to stop paul and stop the end of time will speak to the fact that his character is brave and dedicated. He attempts to take a little lives as possible on his journey showing his appreciation for human life.

 

  • Thoughts: he has many thoughts many of his feelings and the situation his in. “Daniel thought to himself “will I be good enough? Even with these powers I don’t know if im good enough to do it” “

 

  • Actions: Through these actions we will get to see what type of person Daniel. Some good examples of actions are, saving a child amid a gun fight, going out of his way to avoid killing and only using violence when needed and lastly his whole journey to try and save the world almost entirely alone shows to much he cares about earth.

 

  • Speech: a good example of his speech would be the encounters he has with paul throughout the story. “you realize what your doing? Your dooming 8 billion people in the hopes that 100 people can revert it “ I said knowing full well how ridiculous his plan was.

 

  • Affect: he has a rather negative effect through this story. He ends up killing countless people on his journey to save time. And in the end will it matter?

Paul characterzation

Paul/antagonist characterization

 

  • Cunning, persuasive, confident, sly, doomed
  • Direct characterization: Paul is a very 3 dimensional character constantly evolving and changing. “paul said “so now what? You fight through my men you kill Hundreds just for what? You do it just for none of this to matter. “
  • Indirect characterization: a good example is how he acts towards most people. Hes very friendly kind and well spoken. And through the way he acts aswell shows his need to try and change the future.
  • Thoughts: he has many thoughts throughout the story though most of them deal with him thinking out ways to prevent the futures prophecy from coming true.
  • Actions: his actions speak loudest to what type of person he is. Through the whole story he is made out to be the villain when in reality his actions make him an almost hero like character.
  • Speech: he is very well spoken and always gets what hes saying across. Good example of this is when he says “your blinded by the need to sav everyone you cant accept the possibility that casualties must happen in order to save the rest .
  • Affect: he has a generally neutral to almost positive affect on the story. He affects the protagonists negatively but everyone else he affects neutrally or positively

Pre writing brainstorm page

Brainstorming

 

Plot – a sort of sci-fi/surreal Time manipulation story set in the current day. In where the villain is attempting to save only 100 people while time crumbles so that they can fix it and reverse it. But the hero would rather save none then save few.

Characters

  • Main protagonist – layered and multi dimensional. Growing as a character through the story
  • Antagonist/Antihero? – very multi dimensional constantly changing and getting more interesting
  • Secondary character – relatively static but does have a slight Arc

 

Characterization

  • Main protagonist – Very smart brave and dedicated but struggles with deeper emotional issues and conflicts. Struggles with the weight of the universe being on him and him alone. His appeared selfless acts gives the reader the sense that he is the good guy solely focused on stopping the bad guy.
  • Antagonist/Antihero? – Difficult to understand smart convincing and dedicated. But Struggles with issues beyond his control in the universe.  We assume his actions are with evil intent but through these actions it is revealed that his intent was good
  • Main Secondary character – not very confident quiet and introverted. Struggles with suddenly having the weight of the universe on his shoulders. Very static throughout. Contributes to assisting the main character of the story through these actions we get the sense they are a good guy.

 

Symbols

  • The use of time itself in the story is a symbol for how our characters have no control over the universe even if they may manipulate time the universe has a set future.

 

Foreshadowing

  • At some point during the beginning of the story there will be an event or something that happens that at the beginning of the story we shrug off as nothing but at the end of the story it is revealed that it was actually a sort of warning by our protagonist to stop himself from setting events in motion.

 

Irony

  • We believe throughout the story hes going to save time and beat the bad buy but in beating the bad guy he dooms time.

Theme layers

  • L1- Who? The protagonist, the antagonist, the main secondary character

–  what? An attempt to stop the end of time as we know it.

– when? Current day.

– where? Modern day Washington in the seatle are                                                            why? Because this story Is important in showing the battle to stop the end of time

 

  • Feelings. Emotions do not play a major role in my story but there are many emotional moments
  • The have fear For the end of the world
  • They must be brave even in this event.
  • The battle of good and “evil”

 

  • L3 : imagery and mood.

 

  • We all fear things out of our control.

 

  • We will do anything to save our loved ones and or the world.

 

  • The “villain” is made out to be evil by the hero simply due to his less risky way of doing things.

 

 

  • L4: SYMBOLS

 

  • Time is a symbol for the inability to control ones fate.

 

  • Fear of trying to save some to help the rest – evil

 

  • Risking everything to try and save everyone – good

 

 

Theme statement

  • The theme of this story is that none of us control time and we should live every minute of it the best way we can.

 

Identity.

  • I think that with this time manipulation plot the way I can connect identity to it is by trying to make my hero have no real sense of identity. And he only discovers his true self while on this fight through time. Something like his past self didn’t know what the future held but now that hes experienced life this way he has a true sense of purpose. A true sense of identity.